romance otaku

Very good ^-^. I think a lot of us feel similarly about YWS (or have once before). I just have one complaint: too much description. It's like cutting a twig ...

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No one ever said we had to skip spaces between paragraphs here at YWS. Most writers do it to make it easier on themselves. I saw no grammatical errors, or ...

I personally didn't like this poem very much. I felt no rhythm while reading it (it has com to my attention that I have only read a few poems on ...

“I think I’m going to quit.” She announced to him (New Line*) “Why would you do that? You just started this position. This will be good for you.” * “I ...

Contemplation By Romance Otaku 9/15/2010 I feel as if the world may turn and leave me here, Yet I am left with no choice but to listen to things I ...

This is a draft. I need suggestions on the following if possible: - Realism. Is this possible? - Can you relate to Dexter? If so, how? The key to this ...

Certainly not my favorite poem, but it was different. I did feel the rush of emotions, but that included confusion... I felt no rhythm, so I just read this straight ...

Agreed, you have some pretty good imagery going. I felt like you portrayed your ideas perfectly. I just wish there was a little bit more of a rhythm... Oh well, ...

hi ^-^. I'm RO and I'll be your reviewer for the day! You remind me all the time. Every time I stand on the edge, every time play I with ...

I really did like this poem, but like the others said it is really forces. I would suggest leaving the rhymes, and going to freestyle. That is if you can't ...

Hey Romance Otaku! I think Inkwell pretty much summed it up. I really like this poem, and I must admit that I look at homeroom that very way, sometimes. I ...

You will never guess when/where I wrote this poem. Homeroom By Romance Otaku These are the days I wish I could just leave. Why is everyone here so naive? A ...

Hm... Amazing description, definitely. I would love to read more of your work and compare. I felt no rhythm with your poem, though, which brought it down from great to ...

Haha, this poem made me laugh. As a Deist (google it; I know it's at outdated religion, but I looked for a label for my beliefs, not the other way ...